Thursday, November 19, 2015

Thesis Statement and Body Paragraph Assignment

This week, we have been working diligently on composing an informative thesis and body paragraphs based on our planning sheets for the article Welcome to Great Falls Park. The requirements for a body paragraph are as follows:

  • Transition
  • Topic Sentence
  • Evidence 1
  • Elaboration on evidence 1
  • Evidence 2 
  • Elaboration on evidence 2
  • Evidence 3
  • Elaboration on evidence 3
  • Justifier with closing sentence
The basic template for what is expected is below:

      Transition, + restate the topic + because/results in/result of + reason #1. Based on information presented in (Article Name) , (evidence). The evidence provided shows (elaboration). In paragraph number (#) it states, (evidence). This proves (elaboration). The author also states (evidence). This information (elaboration). Justifier, + restate the topic + because/results in/result of + reason #1.

When restating the topic, make sure that you state it differently than you did previously. Elaboration should explain the relation between the evidence, topic, and reason.

Assignment
Utilize the thesis statement that you composed to create two body paragraphs. For assistance with transitions and citing evidence, please refer to your reference sheets "Transitional Words & Phrases" and "Examples of Citing Evidence". If further assistance is necessary, please feel free to email me at samuelela8@gmail.com.

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